the line (assignment 5): revisions

Following the tutor feedback and final revision discussion, this is the final version of the line: presented as a three-page tumblr website, holding 35 video clips plus a menu which has a short instruction plus five menu items (two statements; a methodology collection of video clips, and a reference list, and the standard archive tab).

Assignment 5 is only marginally altered: one clip is shortened, four clips reprocessed and uploaded through tumblr and not Vimeo. Here, the tutor feedback seemed to want to remove one of the key concepts (besides the digital/analog moving of gossip, anecdote) of desires, movement, transgression and their darker undercurrents; and I chose to hold onto the abundance and overwhelm that marks this concept.

https://the———————–line.tumblr.com/

 

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